Its not bad, but i will say that sometimes there is too much chatter and less action involved. i would like to see this series in a much better way though it seems interesting in many ways. also make the sprites more kinda flowing with the area for it dosen't look like you did it in a couple of hours. I do see potential though for this series.
Thanks for the critique! :) Yes, I agree, there is quite a lot of dialogue. I'm finding it difficult to progress the story without it though. But it will definitely be toned down for future episodes.
you get better and better everytime you make a movie
Kinda bad :/
awesome sorry about the heart sugery stuff T_T
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