Its not bad, but i will say that sometimes there is too much chatter and less action involved. i would like to see this series in a much better way though it seems interesting in many ways. also make the sprites more kinda flowing with the area for it dosen't look like you did it in a couple of hours. I do see potential though for this series.
Thanks for the critique! :) Yes, I agree, there is quite a lot of dialogue. I'm finding it difficult to progress the story without it though. But it will definitely be toned down for future episodes.
you get better and better everytime you make a movie
Series Still Good! But Could U Make Them Longer?
Nice!!!! Make More
Dude Make This A Series Please!!!
holy crap this is awesome gosh......
i just have to say this series is 5 stars all the way but ill have to ask how do u post stuff on newgrounds i mean piovt stuff? like i cant post my pivot vids on here.
that's because i dont post pivot stuff. i make the illusion that its pivot by just having spaces between frames. no pivot files, just flash :3
funny not simpile and frea 5 stars
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